Feedback

Team 9 Feedback Heather is the AEA consultant providing feedback on your pages. The highlighted items require action on your part. I will be revisiting those areas to ensure that you have acted on the feedback. If you have any questions, please contact me at hgould@aea267.k12.ia.us

Callie--Where are your editorial and project?
 * PHASE 3 FEEDBACK FORM **

Keaton--I enjoyed reading your short story. You did a nice job incorporating research into it! Please spend some time proofreading - and maybe add some supporting pictures/clip art to liven up the page.

Both of you, please revisit feedback from phase I as well -- make sure you have addressed all suggestions.

I'm looking forward to seeing your final products next week. Please let me know if you have any questions! Not yet… ||
 * **Project Requirements ** || **Completed/Comments ** ||
 * Project Information Page Complete and Updated for each team member || It looks like you both have good ideas for your projects. Be sure to take a look at all the ways you can present your stories using technology, i.e. an ebook, etc. ||
 * A new page has been created for each team member’s project || fddddddddddddAA
 * Each team member’s project is beginning to take shape as evidenced by the action plan and completed student survey. || Not yet… ||
 * Evidence that other team members have either provided feedback or contributed to the success of the project. || Not yet… ||
 * **Team Communication ** ||  ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">Evidence that your team is using the discussion tab to communicate. || <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">Minimal communication is taking place… ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">Evidence that all team members are participating either via communication and/or changes to the pages. || <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">Keep participating! You’re off to a great start, BUT you still have a lot of work ahead of you! I’m excited to see it all come together. ||
 * **<span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">Phases 1 & 2 - Actions on Feedback ** ||  ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">Phase 1 feedback has been addressed and changes are evident. || <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">Please revisit feedback to ensure you’ve addressed all of the highlighted suggestions. ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">Phase 2 Feedback has been addressed and changes are evident. || <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">Thanks, Keaton, for getting your editorial posted. It looks great! Callie, please get yours posted! ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">Phase 2 Feedback has been addressed and changes are evident. || <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 16px;">Thanks, Keaton, for getting your editorial posted. It looks great! Callie, please get yours posted! ||


 * **<span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">Editorial Requirements ** || **<span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">Completed/Comments ** ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">Each team member has posted his/her editorial on the wiki. || No - I don't see an editorial page at all yet?? ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">Each team member submitted his/her editorial to a local newspaper || <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">**Information will be gathered from the teacher** ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">If editorial was published in newspaper, evidence of that is included. ||  ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; text-align: center;">Team Communication ||  ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">There is evidence that your team is using the discussion tab to communicate || Nothing ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">There is evidence that all team members are participating either via communication and/or changes to the page. || Nothing ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">Phase 1 - Actions on Feedback ** ||  ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">There is evidence that the team as addressed the feedback from phase 1. || Nothing ||


 * **<span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Home Page Requirements ** || **<span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Comments/Completed ** ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Title is present || <span style="background-color: #ffff00; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> Please add your title; use the sample wiki to help you set up your page! ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Team member’s names (no last names please) || <span style="background-color: #ffff00; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> Please add team members’ first names ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Position Statement is present || <span style="background-color: #ffff00; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> Please add your position statement. Remember, that is your topic and your stance on it. ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Catchy introductory paragraph complete || <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> You have a good start. You’ve begun with a scenario. That is fine; however, there are a lot of opinions in this paragraph. Avoid that. Throw in some research instead! Convince your audience to read on… ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Supporting visual on home page is in place. || <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> You have a Voki… Consider adding a picture as well. Also, you may want to alter the content of your voki after changing your introduction a bit. ||
 * **<span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Arguments Page Requirements ** || <span style="background-color: #ffff00; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> You need to create your arguments page and copy/paste your chart with your arguments (it’s on the NDW wiki home page) ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Title is present || <span style="background-color: #ffff00; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> No. ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Chart containing at least 10 statements based on research (remember you should have at least 15 when complete) || <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> Hunter, where are your arguments? Please contribute . Your team has some great arguments. ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Research coming from a variety of sources (journals, magazines, blogs, etc.)
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Remember you will need at least 5 different types of sources ** || <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> Yes. ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Works cited entries accurate and correct for each piece of research || <span style="background-color: #ffff00; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> This is an area on which you need to spend some time. Make sure you are citing sources correctly. Refer to one of the citation websites to help you – there are also lots of resources on the home page under Resources. ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Visual of some sort to support and enhance your message || <span style="background-color: #ffff00; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> No. ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Arguments present come from research--NOT student opinions! Just the facts please. || <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> Most are fine. Please delete the one labeled ‘opinion’. ||
 * **<span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Team Communication ** ||  ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Evidence that your team is using the discussion tab to communicate || <span style="background-color: #ffff00; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';"> Nope. Please communicate via this tab. If you want to have a successful project, you must communicate and dedicate time to this project. Please let me know if you need help because you were not at the face to face meeting! ||
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 14.6667px;">Evidence that all team members are participating either via communication and/or changes to the page. || <span style="background-color: #ffff00; font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';">Only Callie has made changes to the wiki as far as I can tell. Please make sure you are all working to figure out the technology! Be a risk taker!! ||